For my photostory preview, I think I want to try to convey a story of bad and good in one's life. The classical "ups and downs", high points/ low points with a turning point. I use the lighting and the nature of the photo to begin the photostory at a very low point. The bud and half open poppy resemble the turning point and then the ending shows an open and mature flower and light. This is a rough "sketch" with my own photos but I think I have the story line down and can use my photo manipulation tools to better convey this story.
Good and bad, great theme! I'm looking forward to seeing how the story plays out.
ReplyDeleteI like your story line. I'm interested to see how your final presentation turns out. It's a great idea to use the flower and light together to tell your story.
ReplyDeleteI love the theme. I just don't see the bad. I like your pictures but I don't really get the flow.
ReplyDeleteI really like what you are trying to convey with this story. I agree with Karen. Maybe some sharper "bad" photos would be more compelling. I think the one with the stair railings is a great idea. Maybe try to grab a crisper photo where it looks trapped. I really like this story. Can't wait to see it!
ReplyDeleteI really like the theme of your photostory. The order that you chose for your photos is great and the fourth photo makes a nice transition from the "dark" to the "light". Nice job!
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